|Reviews for I Go To Sleep|
| vulnerata chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
I really like this! Great job!
| purple x pen chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
you're a very good writer, i espcially like this one, because once again i can relate, especially to the last line..
| BalletManiac chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
One word - Brilliant!
This is 'Tragically Beautiful'.
It's going on my favorites list :)
| A Dreamer in Disguise chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
first of all, thank you for reviewing one of my poems; i love it when i get feedback ] second of all, you are a wonderful writer! i absolutely love this poem, especially because i can tell your words are straight from the heart. its also something i feel i can relate to;
"I go to sleep to flee from mortal woes
And sometimes, in the seconds before I slip away
I silently hope I never wake."
your words are beautiful and true and deep and what's wonderful is that ive had similar thoughts before.
bravo, keep it up!
| Militant Poet chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
Beautiful poem, I know how you feel...
| SnackySnackSnackSnackSnack chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
I love your word choices... And I completely relate.
| Kissing Concrete chapter 1 . 8/31/2007
this is so sad! the words you chose really show the sorrow that the speaker feels and he/she tries to run away from all of his/her problems instead of facing them.
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
Emotional poem. Thanks for sharing. Always be positive and write on.