Reviews for My Suicide
sdffds chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
Hm...it's powerful, but also sad. Good, but also sad ending
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
That is so sad.

Good job though.

Twilight Starr
Levana chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
I think that there were one or two tense problems but apart from that it was pretty cool.
IrishLynn chapter 1 . 9/11/2007
this is good and made me think a little. thanks :)
Untitled and Unfinished chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
wow...thats pretty deep for such a short chappie...is there going to be more?
XsilentXescapeX chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
i like poems that are read like a story. ive actually been working on trying to write in that style cause i like it so much. this was good. i really like the first part. my favorite line is

"What I know is that even from the quick action the doctors took, my life was slipping away faster then sand from open fingers. Darkness and haziness of clarity begin to take over and I slip into a deep sleep, never to wake."

its really good. keep writing!

silent
Andrea Roycee chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
I liked this b/c it is true. killing yourself is not right, you will not get the kind of attention that you want. People won't build a statue of you and they won't remember your death. Think twice before you make that decision because you will never come back.
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
Is this a true story?