Reviews for The Death of Me
Italianpryde chapter 1 . 11/26/2007
hey Haunted Misery i don't know if you remember me but i used to post a few years ago under the name MeAgAiNsTtHeMuZic44... but anyways this was a magnificent and raw piece. the only part i didnt like was the swearing in the middle, but otherwise congrats on a great piece
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
Great poem. It's so sad.

~Twilight Starr~
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
I like this a lot.. the title is powerful and the whole piece is great.. the format is well done and I really love how you describe how you felt with him.. that part was awesome.. the only thing is there were a few lines that were really long and seemed to mess up the flow a little bit, but that may just be me
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
wow, amazing poem. I love the use of italizing, makes those words pop out with importance. Keep it up!

heartbroken922 chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
good poem! i could tell you worked hard on this. great job!
pale doll chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
When I read this, I kept picturing a girl circling around a guy tied to a chair and she was shouting the words in his face. Sorry if that's a little weird, but I think it's awesome. This poem is really good, I can't wait to read more updates from you! xx
queenvixta chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
Wow! This was so good! You really are back and better than ever, if that's even possible!

I loved this piece, the last two lines really reached out to me.

Great job.

Kusuriuri chapter 1 . 8/26/2007

I hate to say this but it totally reminds me how I felt when my ex broke off with me. All the broken promises and pain of betrayal.
Exodus.Escence Of Sin chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
Absolutely amazing, you took the words right out of my mouth and turned it into a wonderful pece of poetry and i applaud you for that .

I have the same feelings for someone right now and i couldnt have descibed it any better than you.

Wonderful job i have to admit.

And i hope that you continue to write poems with great emotion because i can certainly sa that i can totally realte to this one the most out of any other poem that ive read so far.