Reviews for My Time
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
Wow, a worldly piece, if you'll excuse the pun. :) This is very encompassing, and that's nice to see in a poem this size. Really well-worded and the imagery was divine. Keep writing! :)
Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
I love the last stanza. The imagery in this is great. I almost want to guess that they green-blue glass is grass, from keeping the lid tight to preserve it...and the hints in that stanza about earthly smell. Beautiful.