Reviews for You Will Love Me
Which Mistake am I chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
i really like this and i think that at some piont a lot of people feel this way at some piont making this that much better!
Lost in A World of Pain chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
Hey there, me again, sorry for long absence and lack of reviews, just haven't had a chance to go online. As per usual I read this poem several times and I have to admit in feeling a moving emotion as I read it. The feelings being expressed in this poem seem to me to be of true longing and desire, desire of comfort, support and unrequisitional love. The emotion conveyed in the poem makes the reader (well me, but I'm just weird I guess) want to reach out and support the person in need in this poem. I'm rather tired as I'm doing this review and so I hope that what I've written makes sense. Great poem. Again, sorry for not reviewing your work sooner.

Cheers

Lost in A World of Pain
Amarant Rose Coral chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
this was really a nice job:D really good poem:D I liked the small "stop being pessimistic girl" hehe:) it really added a lot to the poem. Good job.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
"Stop being so pessimistc, even if it's true."

Wow. It feels like I've told that to myself before.

Really nice phrasing. Lovely work.