|Reviews for Love, I Know|
| sink florida sink chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
i love this.
| S. Ben Beach chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
I love the honesty in this piece - sometimes as good as the imagery is, when people exaggerate emotions it gets quite sickly. I actually found the awkward line breaks good, considering I sometimes have them as well.. heh. Although I have to say the use of the dash gets killed after a while, using it occasionally and to great effect is better than using it as much as you feel like it in my opinion. At times it feels a bit weak ("to vandalise my already feeble soul") - vandalise is good, already feeble, not so good. But hey, that's just my opinion... keep doing your thing :)
| Exodus.Escence Of Sin chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
lovely poem. i can relate to this alot. good job and keep up the good work.
| this is britt chapter 1 . 8/25/2007