Reviews for My Whatever Cliché
Scarlett Wynter chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
I love your poetry. It's so inspiring. You managed to turn a clichéd topic into something so refreshing and new. I would say which line is my favorite, but I like them all!
Dextera chapter 1 . 9/19/2007
There is no cliche with you. For being only fifteen, you are one of the most talented people I have read works of in quite a while. Thank you, it's been very refreshing. And as always, thank you for the review. My favorite line by far is

"Caught a disease

at the idea of you."

It's a bit chilling.
she smolders chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
This is beautiful, in a 'it puts a sad smile on my face' kind of way. I think any of my poems about love in the end say that I just want it for once.
IwasSmitten chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
I like the concept and feeling of desire you have here. Nice flow and great diction as well. All your poems are very beautiful. Keep up the great work and thank you very much for the review.
Stella Grimshaw chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
This is the ultimate yearning for love poem. Another favorite.
hey maria chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
"Caught a disease/at the idea of you." I really, really liked that.

I think this ended a little abruptly, but maybe it's supposed to be that way.