agh this is good. so good. !

Nice one-shot!

wow that was an excellent oneshot! I also think smoking's terrible!

:)

This was a fantastic little piece.

I like how the characters were nameless and all you had to judge them on was what was there. And how we weren't spoonfed something to think about them. They just existed as they were.

I'm a believer in that femmeslash is most sensual when it is subtle, and this was. It was gorgeous and sexy and fantastic.

Yay for you (:

And I liked your author's note at the end. :P

Hahaa. i Love your A/N. And indeed. 3 Smoking is horrible. / I cna't ever imagine myself being addicted to anything besides coffee _ ; (that's the only drug that's acceptable in my book. lols. xD- aside from medical ones.)

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well, thanks for writing, and it is a 'pretty' picture you're painting there with y'all words, and by pretty, i mean in the...cool? kind of way..lols...3 if that makes sense... _ ;

once again, thanks for writing. )

I need to learn how to write like you.

this is actually really good and i liked it alot!

you should write more about this chick tho! she really intrigues me!

*ahem* and clearly by "seen" I mean "scene."

Awesome

very nice..i like how stuff was described without being over powering or boring. like how physical descriptions didn't reali matter, just the relationship. nice :)