omg hes a coppppppp

pleaseee update, I know it has been over a decade but please!

That was a WASTE of reading all that with no actual 18 happening.

hi

Are you going to countinue?

It's been years but. We still want updates! This needs to happen these two need to do it.

I love this story and i love Jacob so much! xD I hope that you'll continue writing this but if not i understand :-)

Please continue. Your story is the only thing I look forward to. Pretty please?

i really like the story but i am a litlle yung but i have no fear i just want to get perpared for what just might happen in the future and if this happens ill just rember what would ash do *me* *smacks a boy weakly in the face* lol im sorry XD i just want to be a little funnt for you

AWESOME!PLEASE KEEP ON WRITING ABOUT THEM

Amazing!Please don't stop with 1st person, knowing Ash's feelings are important because she's the main character.I love where this is going!I think in some chapters later Sexy Voice will be more direct with his loooove and try to make out with Ash would then be frightened of him and run out of the room into another kidnapper's Sexy Voice would have to save her, but because he saved her they both have to run and escape the yada yada yada... stuff happens

PLEASE CONTINUE IM DYING HERE! I need to know what happens next

Ooohhhh please continue don't leave us on a Clift hanger! I love it please keep writing tbh I don't care if there are mistakes! I think you should write about her walking in the bathroom with him
Love peace Ellie

Please update the story don't just leave it hear

Please finish it is such a great story