Reviews for Fits Just Right
caralita chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
why are you so amazing?
glimpses from an ivory tower chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
"-by a pain that rapes her and tells her who she is.

Dresses her in gowns of oleander-

in garments that don't allow her to breathe."

Brutal imagery. A biting satire on society's cruel determination to pigeon-hole individuals. Raw, poignant, real.

In the words of Keats, "Poetry should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts, and appear almost a remembrance." As such, I once again feel obligated to thank you for writing.
Luna Turner chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
Depressing... LOVE IT! Just playing. Seriously. Nice job.
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
excellent poem. you write well, it flows awesomely. Keep it up.

Faith
lilyqueen777 chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
Wow this is a lovely poem, and I can especially relate to this as well!

this is wonderful imagery, and totally a poem on my fav. list ]
Stella Grimshaw chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
. Tattooes spat

on and etched on by sting- by a pain

that rapes her and tells her who she is.

Dresses her in gowns of oleander-

in garments that don't allow her to breathe.

I'm not quite sure why but those lines awoke something in me. I'm not sure if it's inspiration or just wonder, but I absolutely adore them.
flies.like.decay chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
Great job. I don't even know what to say...and I usually fill these boxes with nonsense..