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Reviews for
maybe december
DOORphrame
chapter 1 .
8/27/2007
I really liked it, especially the last stanza. It did seem that the break in the 'I’m sure they’re too strong to be kept/ In my mouth.' lines didn't really fit; I think I wanted it after strong instead.
Artemis Anderson
chapter 1 .
8/26/2007
I love it.