|Reviews for the circular intent of kissing and traffic|
| Stella Grimshaw chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
I'm in love with your writing, simple as that.
| clockwork kiss chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
i love it. i love the circle theme (shows how human thought stems away from something and then comes back to it), and "chewed away". very neat and perfectly composed little piece. a couple of really bright images, too. "tarot card" especially. thanks for sharing.
| i'll ask the stars above chapter 1 . 9/7/2007
whatever, i'm a moron.
you, darlin', are a genius.
| hey maria chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
I really like the way the themes of brakes and lipstick interact. And the last two lines.
| she smolders chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
The last two lines seem to resonate within me, and I can't get them out of my head. Take care.
| painting andromeda chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
This is beautiful. The spacing and punctuation and eveything makes it come to life. Great feat.