Reviews for Moonlight and Redwoods
SirScott chapter 1 . 9/28/2007
I liked the line the yin and yang are one in the same.

SirScott
painting andromeda chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
'Silent bliss flying and falling on top of me

like snowflakes performing my favorite ballet

It's nice to hear my heart beat again

It's nice to hear my heart sing again

The moon smiles at me from rise till her fall

Reassuring my eyes with sand that sleep is visiting tonight

My pillow is still soaked with thoughts of you, it'll dry soon

But I must say good night for I haven't been dreaming in years

It's nice to have you behind my eyelids at night again

It's nice to have you in my heart and life again'

Brilliant. Simply amazing. I'm in love with the concept of this poem, of gaining back a seemingly lost love. I just wish we all could be so lucky. Great work!
from beneath the bell jar chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
God this is really beautiful. Best poem I've read in a long time. Man, where do I start? The wording was so clever and poetic. I usually pick a line I like but there were so many...oh well, I'll pick some anyway:

"Where the emeralds are far from green

And words are never misunderstood"

"Silent bliss flying and falling on top of me

like snowflakes performing my favorite ballet" - my absolute favorite.

"My pillow is still soaked with thoughts of you, it'll dry soon"

Anyway, awesome awesome piece. Adding to my c2.

Maybe you could check out my new piece, "Endless"?