|Reviews for Clichés|
| DeepBlueEcho chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
i love the fact that i haven't read anything like this so far. i also love the poem itself. it's an unusual approach and very unique but it also makes perfect sense. it's like a puzzle, if you see what i mean...maybe not. i tend to ramble.
anyway great writing, enjoyed the read.
| Masked Soul chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
I know in your profile you asked for reviews on two other things but this didn't have any so I thought you might like one. The poem is good but it's kind of weird. Yea each line does flow into the next but i kinda get lost trying to interpret it I think if you let the inspiration show through a bit more it would have been clearer but you still did a great job keep writing (don't think i need to say that by the look of it though lol)