Reviews for Like a Bad Lyric |
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![]() ![]() ![]() kewl story so far :D |
![]() ![]() Great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'collage' should be "COLLEGE" 'mans' should be "MAN'S" 'Jakes' should be "JAKE'S" 'cousular' should be "COUNSELOR" Good chapter. Looking forward to seeing how the date goes. ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() kjlfsodsaoipafoi. veryveryvery good. this keeps getting better. i LOVE your story. and you dont have to worry, you update quickly enough, one week is better than most. i look forward to more! |
![]() ![]() once again, amazing. this really if a great story. i hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() that was really really good. ill be looking forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the characters. Good chapter. Looking forward to an update. :) ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great beginning. It's very interesting in a very good way. Good luck with writing and this story. :) ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() aw man this just gets better. you can really feel the people in it, like, you get a feeling of who they are right away. i love it. keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() seems interesting, continue please ( |
![]() ![]() aww this is really cute. please do keep writing it, ill be sure to be tuning in :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey there! you could use a little work on grammar and spelling, but i think the chapter sounds good. i like how she's talking to the reader and would like to see what else is coming. |