Reviews for Let Me Jump
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
that was hilarious. i love the little author note on the bottom. that's great. people take things a little too seriously too often. nice.
Nath chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
I want more writing! -temper tantrum-... please?
vickie chapter 1 . 9/30/2007
i really like this one
morethancarbon chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
That's darling, I love it.

Even though it's uber short and simple, it's jam-packed with meaning. The best kind of poems, in my opinion.
Nathron chapter 1 . 9/10/2007
hehe, I love this Mellon-nin. Thats very clever.
Forie-mi chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
Such a short poem, but it made me smile, i find it hard to explain, but i enjoyed this poem. It is a skill to be able to convey such a feeling in so few words. It seems i have been unable to do the same in this comment. Never the less please keep up the good work.

Forie-mi x