|Reviews for Chocolate Covered BoxerBriefs|
| Kellie Chronity chapter 2 . 6/15
This is just terrible. Right now I'm sad because you write so terribly. I'm so sorry for you.
| Kellie Chronity chapter 1 . 6/15
Okay where do I start.
Family- You basically start off giving the mother and the brother stereotypical personalities. Specifically The House Wife and The Goth. Doing this you pretty much put those characters into a flat box. "...they didn't even bother with me". Well okay now I expect that the parent character are basically non existent. How do you expect to have character development when the family he interacts with is limited to his "goth brother".
His only friend. You know the one that's popular. How... descriptive of you. I can totally see his interesting personality and his diverse character background. Cough Sarcasm Cough. Its not like your going to base his entire character on the main characters sexuality and feelings. Oh wait looks like you are.
Lets go to the fact that your thoughts are all over the place. Now funny random things totally fine. But your organization with this is all over the place. Its painful really.
Your dialogue is basic, boring, and predictable.
Your description on how one "looks" gay, "smells" gay, and "taste" gay is very insulting. Your basically saying that gay people look, smell, and taste distinctively gay. As if every gay person is a carbon copy or as if their is a way gay people should look/smell like/taste like.
Wtf are you on? Just... Why?
Just because you wake up like that doesn't make you gay (unless the point of the story is to show how ridicules these thoughts are; then its funny).
GASP! I'm gay! I wake up gay! That's probably the best and funniest line there to be honest.
He sounds so sure that he's gay... He better go tell his mom though... He also needs some gay porn apparently... (Lets ignore the emotional factor ENTIRELY because apparently that's A OK)
I'm that friends laughing his butt off.
Okay I'm going to read farther. I really hope this chapter is what I'm expecting from the rest of the story.
| Zoicite23 chapter 1 . 2/4
Woah woah woah, what the fuck is this?
| Arianna chapter 21 . 1/3
Omg I lived this story so much! The over protective brother was great! I love you keep writing!
| Zantedeschia chapter 7 . 12/18/2015
LOL. I don't think he will get any boyfriend with his Personality, he doesn't have any brain
| Zantedeschia chapter 4 . 12/18/2015
Oh my god :V
| Zantedeschia chapter 3 . 12/18/2015
Those Line tho, so fucking funny
"First gay date"
Fuck, he is a douche
I'm laughing out loud
| bryanareneea chapter 21 . 6/20/2015
I loved it! It's cute, sweet, funny, and something different. I'll definitely be rereading very soon ...
| someone chapter 21 . 3/4/2015
Oh, my, god... This story is so good. There should be a film made based on this :O
| shirsong chapter 2 . 2/10/2015
Thank you for writing this story!
I can't stop laughing.
| tyves986 chapter 21 . 11/16/2014
I was not rooting for Michael at all. I guess I kind of wanted to see what things were like with Jacob? A one second kiss, but I guess if those were his feelings I suppose that is how it is. I thought this was rather an abrupt ending (though you said it yourself)...I was still surprised. Anyways it was cute in the extremely fluffy way.
| rockspapersnscissors chapter 21 . 8/11/2014
This is really just too fucking adorable! XD
Thanks for the great read!
| 21p chapter 1 . 7/8/2014
beautiful. i cant believe this
imho for bein like questionably 15 jayden acts like hes 5.. sometimes ;)
gonna keep readin this tho cuz i have nothing to do haha
| Gay Satan chapter 21 . 5/24/2014
OhMyGod. I so wanted Jayden to end up with Jacob, sniff, cuz I think they'd be a super hot couple, but oh wellz. I'm still sad about it but eh. The story was really funny so it made up for it. Sigh.
| Guest chapter 21 . 3/12/2014
Could you please add on another chapter, I know what you could write about you could write about him and his boy friend finally having sex. That is what I was waiting for the whole time I was reading this story please I would really love it if you would. I love your writing and I hope to read more.3