|Reviews for Chocolate Covered BoxerBriefs|
| Vesterpop chapter 9 . 8/2/2010
Cutest ending ever. Not gonna lie. EVER.
| Vesterpop chapter 5 . 8/2/2010
I don't feel like making a list since I don't even know if you're alive right now. So whatever, I'll just say that I liked the chapter.
| Vesterpop chapter 4 . 8/2/2010
Ok, "very" isn't spelled "vary". Also, some of the positions you used for characters were difficult for me to grasp. I didn't quite know where Jayden and David were in relation to each other the whole time they were waiting out front. I still love the still though, and will probably finish reading it! YAY!
| Vesterpop chapter 3 . 8/2/2010
I forgot to mention that this story is making me laugh out loud literally. Just saying. I am, however, pissed off that your main character finds three prospective boyfriends so effing easily. It's the thing I love and hate about slash.
| Vesterpop chapter 2 . 8/2/2010
Haha, that's how I felt when I had my first kiss with a boy, too.
| Vesterpop chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Lol. I love the mental image of this chapter. Just so you know, as an ACTUAL boy, I'm gonna be critical of this. No funny shit, got it? Actually, it really doesn't matter, heehee.
| Missus Ann chapter 18 . 7/29/2010
This is amazing.
My good God.
| diwu6398 chapter 13 . 7/28/2010
Song: Life is Beautiful by Sixx: A.M. and every song by The Fray, if you couldn't tell from my username.
Drink: Milk and various kinds of tea...
Name: David, Jesus, Jake
Color: teal, blue
Pet/ Animal: furry cat things.
book: A Thousand Splendid Suns by Khaled Hosseini. Possibly the most amazing dude ever. He puts new meaning to "Painting a picture with words."
Another great chapter!
| diwu6398 chapter 12 . 7/28/2010
Q #1: I totally love Lucian from the Mafia Runner. Jake in Run to You is cool too.
Q #2: I have OCD. I fidget all the time and I have a terrible fear of the number four. Like, so bad that I freak out if a sentence has four words or there are four sentences in a paragraph. I'm also afraid of mailmen and veins. This is my fifth sentence so I don't freak out.
Anyways, great job so far with writing this. He's meeting an awful lot of gay/ bi people!
| diwu6398 chapter 5 . 7/28/2010
I know you've already finished this, but I can't help but make a list when someone offers me a chance to!
1. Go bungee jumping.
2. Go scuba diving.
3. Go skydiving.
4. Get really, really, drunk.
5. Make out with a random person I meet at a party.
6. Go parasailing.
7. Go to at least five European countries.
8. Give a hundred dollar tip OR give a hundred dollars to a homeless person.
9. Go to college.
10. Get married.
| diwu6398 chapter 4 . 7/28/2010
Okay, as much as I love this story, don't you think it's kind of unrealistic for someone to be THAT happy to be gay? I mean, I know the technical definition of gay means happy, but still. Also, it is VERY, not vary. Vary is like various shades of green. Very is like extremely, as in, he is very hot. Sorry to bother you with my annoying spelling rules. Can't wait to read more. The characters are a little confusing, by the way.
| diwu6398 chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
LOL I fucking laughed so hard at that! "I'm gay." HAHA I wish I could just say that to my parents! It's more fun to be weird, ya? hehehehe )
| Insanity's Genius chapter 21 . 7/27/2010
Very cute and awesome story! Had me up til 2am! D
| panictowel chapter 3 . 7/25/2010
- 'I'm awake but it's probably four in the morning and I like to sleep at four in the morning. Don't know why, maybe because it's sane, unlike my insane friend who keeps shaking me.'
... XD best sentence
| MovingTheClouds chapter 21 . 6/22/2010
I love Jayden with all the bits of my heart! He makes me happily explode so many colors causing colorful bits of my soul to form rainbows! I love him so much! I am so glad him and Michael ended up together.