I don't feel like making a list since I don't even know if you're alive right now. So whatever, I'll just say that I liked the chapter.

Ok, "very" isn't spelled "vary". Also, some of the positions you used for characters were difficult for me to grasp. I didn't quite know where Jayden and David were in relation to each other the whole time they were waiting out front. I still love the still though, and will probably finish reading it! YAY!

I forgot to mention that this story is making me laugh out loud literally. Just saying. I am, however, pissed off that your main character finds three prospective boyfriends so effing easily. It's the thing I love and hate about slash.

Haha, that's how I felt when I had my first kiss with a boy, too.

Lol. I love the mental image of this chapter. Just so you know, as an ACTUAL boy, I'm gonna be critical of this. No funny shit, got it? Actually, it really doesn't matter, heehee.

This is amazing.

I just.

Couldn't even.

Like... process..

My good God.

Amazing.

Song: Life is Beautiful by Sixx: A.M. and every song by The Fray, if you couldn't tell from my username.

Drink: Milk and various kinds of tea...

Name: David, Jesus, Jake

Color: teal, blue

letter: K

Pet/ Animal: furry cat things.

food: FRUIT

book: A Thousand Splendid Suns by Khaled Hosseini. Possibly the most amazing dude ever. He puts new meaning to "Painting a picture with words."

Another great chapter!

Q #1: I totally love Lucian from the Mafia Runner. Jake in Run to You is cool too.

Q #2: I have OCD. I fidget all the time and I have a terrible fear of the number four. Like, so bad that I freak out if a sentence has four words or there are four sentences in a paragraph. I'm also afraid of mailmen and veins. This is my fifth sentence so I don't freak out.

Anyways, great job so far with writing this. He's meeting an awful lot of gay/ bi people!

I know you've already finished this, but I can't help but make a list when someone offers me a chance to!

1. Go bungee jumping.

2. Go scuba diving.

3. Go skydiving.

4. Get really, really, drunk.

5. Make out with a random person I meet at a party.

6. Go parasailing.

7. Go to at least five European countries.

8. Give a hundred dollar tip OR give a hundred dollars to a homeless person.

9. Go to college.

10. Get married.

Okay, as much as I love this story, don't you think it's kind of unrealistic for someone to be THAT happy to be gay? I mean, I know the technical definition of gay means happy, but still. Also, it is VERY, not vary. Vary is like various shades of green. Very is like extremely, as in, he is very hot. Sorry to bother you with my annoying spelling rules. Can't wait to read more. The characters are a little confusing, by the way.

LOL I fucking laughed so hard at that! "I'm gay." HAHA I wish I could just say that to my parents! It's more fun to be weird, ya? hehehehe )

Very cute and awesome story! Had me up til 2am! D

- 'I'm awake but it's probably four in the morning and I like to sleep at four in the morning. Don't know why, maybe because it's sane, unlike my insane friend who keeps shaking me.'

... XD best sentence

YO

I love Jayden with all the bits of my heart! He makes me happily explode so many colors causing colorful bits of my soul to form rainbows! I love him so much! I am so glad him and Michael ended up together.

Lol! My friend in school recomended I read this, and I'm so happy I took her advice! Good stuff! :3