I love this one _

If I must say beautiful peice. Your imagery is amazing, and though this is a free verse the form is almost flawless I especially love the line:

"And a knife would become your first love."

Very tragic in your explanation, and you get your point across beautifully. Well done and keep up the good work.

I'm not expert on poetry, so I won't even attempt critique of stlye or meter or anything. This was a sad, sad piece. "But don’t you see?" - that was just so desperate, just pleading for understanding. Since I can't write poetry, I always appreciate people who can. Thanks for writing and posting this, it was good.