Reviews for On My Own
Julian Toepfer chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
this is so good. the use of itallics really gives the piece a great rhythm. i absolutly love the line about the grass trying to pull you into the earth. you create some very very strong imagery. i definetly like your style a whole lot. keep it up!
The Imposer chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
I virtually never review strangers but this was ridiculously breaking.

I slumped humbly as I realized you were human.