Reviews for Lost Tie
DofD chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
Amazing!
luv2write2k11 chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
There is nothing wrong with this story. It's fabulous. I loe matt's character n d fact he actually stole the tie. I can't see y people didn't give it reviews but i'll let you know that this is a brillant work. Pls write more oneshots like this
Rosedreamer101 chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
haha, looks like you don't have 2review ;) you now have 36. good job ! :)
Millie chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
Wow awsomely vivid keep up the good work
Elle chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
Loved the story, by the way this is the 3rd story I have read by you that is about best friends sleeping together, by any chance do you happen to have a hot male friend with black hair and an earring?
MaxMcDowell chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
lol well now you have 33 reviews.

That was a great story thank you for posting it.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
i like it, more details would be good. and maybe longer..
michaeljacksonlovaa chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
effin' loved itt. i'm not usually into these, but it's great.

Über smexii!
lucrezia chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
Haha so he did steal her dad's tie... great story- very sexy
itsames chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
Great plot.

But...

I wonder how he managed to get a hold of her father's tie...?
I'm-The-Weird-Girl chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
haha he really did steal her dads tie!

lols

luved as i do all your other stories!

they r all amzin!
PsychoDreamChika chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
i loved this soty! i say that it was very good! SEXY! it made me all hot n bothered lol but yeah u have talent D
alternatearcadia chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
I liked the idea of the story and enjoyed reading it, especially that little quirky bit at the end there with the tie (LOL! Naughty!), but there are several improvements that could be made in terms of general grammar stuff. If you get a beta or someone to look it over to polish it up (or go look at some grammar websites... Google it), you'd have a pretty neat (both literally and figuratively) one-shot.

Just a few things I caught: Dialogue almost always begins in a new line/new paragraph. Paragraphs shouldn't be too long (coz' then they just look like huge chunks of text on screen, which doesn't look pretty and definitely does not make reading easy). Commas and punctuation problems - you're missing a few commas here and there, and dialogues end with a comma (not a period) if accompanied with a speech tag e.g. "I'm sorry," he said. NOT "I'm sorry." he said.

I also wish it could be just a little longer! I'd have preferred some more description about the characters or even a bit of backstory to orientate us readers. Hope this helps!
unmotivated.sap chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
i love twists in stories and movies, and this a good twist, though it's kind of predictable from the middle already.

the smut was hot too.

i enjoyed it. _
Hazelnut Romance chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
nice plot.
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