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| paradise street chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
"But they trample me and I scream in terror. Is this enough?" Ek. Gave me the shudders, that one, as did "Why did you leave me here so utterly undead?". Absolutely beautiful. /Horrifying/ but beautiful. This could do with a bit of an edit (ie. "adreniline" should be "adrenaline".) but, other than that, this is brilliant!