Way too long to develop.

Lame story. Seriously no sex moment between the babysitter and the young boy. WTF. IT'S WHAT OTHER READERS WOULD'VE BEEN EXPECTING AND HOPING FOR.

lol 'm assuming the title comes from the salesman, denver max
this was a cute, short oneshot and i enjoyed reading it (:

Cute story I liked it
And...
LOVE ur profile pick.. the doctor is sexy ;)

Well, I'll fucking favorite it anyways :)

OMG, I like it, and honestly, I didn't expect that ('pedo warning's fault). Good story. Good ending (Carl made a good choice, 'cause he really could go to jail).

And it wasn't thaaat weird (or pedo, however), well, that's maybe because I 'loved' a 13-years-old-girl when I was 18, and frankly, she was very mature. Ok, it still sound kinda sick, lol; but it really wasn't, I didn't corrupt her. Er, however... keep writing :)

Why is it called Babysitter Denver Max? Cause, no one in the story is called Denver Max

If you wanted to, you could even make this a story. It seems that the parents trust Carl, and it would raise questions if suddenly he refused to babysit Jonah. So the chapters could be all the times Carl would babysit Jonah, even if it spanned over years. It would be interesting, Jonah would go through puberty and Carl would probably get another boyfriend and jealousy would come up, Ohhh! But, then again, you said it wouldn't happen... it would've been a great story, probably SKoW worthy.

It would be a really good second chapter it it was like when Jonah was 20 or something, but this is good still!

Sequel sequel sequel sequel! XD

You should make a sequel.

There should be more of this! :) Please! :D

Cute fic! -

it was a cute short story. i think it would be awesome if there was a one-shot sequel to this, like, if Jonah was 18 and Carl started dating him. i think that would be cool.

Hey - just wanted to say that I enjoyed your story (but then, I'm a devout shota/yaoi fan, so it figures). I only wish I knew what happens NOW, knowwhatimean? :)