|Reviews for Poems|
| Sexy Vampirechick chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
Nice!I like how you describe poems in your poem.I too have a poem about poem,but it's nothing compared to you should check it out sometime.
| Guerrilla Poet chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
I'm a little divided on this work here, because as I read it I really found myself enjoying it. Problem is, even as I enjoy it I'm well aware of it's flaws. A few spelling errors, and man...brackets in this format do not work. They really screw with the whole vibe of the piece. A better idea, since you've already had some two line punches earlier, might have been to add a two worder of "Just remember." right before the bracketed line instead. Shoulda dropped it through a spell checker too. That was the big bad for me.