Reviews for I wish
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 9/20/2007
konban wa

I have a quote book, and there are a few quotes I added from fictionpress. I'm about to (hopefully) add one more. Can I add to it (using your name, of course) this quote: "I wish that I could sleep forever / Then all of my dreams would come true / I wish for all of this and more / But most of all, I wish for you" And - so you know, asking to add something to my quote book is the ultimate compliment I ever give someone, LoL.

Zaijen

-Shan-
qblisa chapter 1 . 8/31/2007
I loved it. So sweet. Innocent and happy. Yeah, it was corny, but sometimes corny is good.

Well written,

Lisa :)

PS: Loved the bit about sleeping forever, so all of your dreams come true.
klare chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
yeh, its corny, but its nice. some beautiful little moments. :]
EyesEmphatic chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
It would have been corny if you'd worded it a different way, but the way you put this is all rather original, so it doesn't seem lame. It's sweet, good job.