|Reviews for Feeling|
| Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
schön padodox, habe lange darüber nachgedacht, aber gefällt mir!
| AK the Twilight chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
Short poetry is tough. It's difficult to get a serious message out in such short line increments. This message, however, was simple, though it did feel accessible and real. There's something sympathetic in waiting for a loved one, despite the pain on the outside. This was short, but good. I did like your longer poetry more, but this was still a good poem to read.
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
| sleeplessblue chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
wow! for being so short, that really packs a punch. Great work, k-doll. Keep it up. :)
| RedXfire chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
So short yet to the point.
and hey... men dont like girls who play to hard to get LOL... well acually we love em but w.e lol
| XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
Very short, I think it needs more.
| AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
poor you. hope it wasn't always like this. and while you wait for men, you might need more then coffe, they usally take forever if they ever show up.
| changed.by.an.afterthought chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
my favorite line is the second one. it has a beautiful mystery about it like 'why does she enjoy doing that? or why is she in the first place?' great job.