Reviews for Carnate
catalyst.enigma chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
Dayum. Goodness.
the Stranger in the moonlight chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
Longing was wonderful in this... because nothing but what you long for can ever complete you. I love the last three lines, though these caught me even more.


Looking into her eyes was a pureness

A crystal clear torture inside of my bones"

The truth burns and thats what I got from reading these lines.

~the Stranger in the moonlight
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
Wow. I was pretty surprised when I started reading this, to be honest. An amazing, odd, but wonderful piece from you. I'm adding it to my favourites.

Sir Scott chapter 1 . 8/31/2007
That was an interesting piece. A lip ring sounds kind of painful. I never was one for piercings.

she smolders chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
This is good. Really good. And more then a little bittersweet.
Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
It's insane (in a good way). Very odd, and difficult to grasp. It's powerful and raw...

Stella Grimshaw chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
Definitely one of your more odd works but so so so powerful and deep. I loved the the all around insanity of it. Perfect.
brynn amber chapter 1 . 8/29/2007

powerful work

really well done