Reviews for His Smile
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
Wonderful song.

It like it.

~Twilight Starr~
His Mercy's Waiting chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
It was okay...not exactly draggy, but nothing really jumped out at me. And just a note: the 2nd line should be "with no one inside your heart to love".

Keep writing!
lymli chapter 1 . 9/10/2007
well, I really love this song, specially the first lines.
Alexandria Smith chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
This is really good, gosh but its sad... where did you get such inspiration for such a beautiful poem? This was realy good!

sweets555 chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
ohohoh! i know this feeling...hate it...but i know it. great job, i adore it! going to favs!