Reviews for Moonpie
WhinyPoetryFromGenerationY chapter 1 . 8/31/2007
Completely insane...but pretty fantastic. I really like the characters you create.

Hope this gets updated!


Tranquil Thorns chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
Wow. I love the originality.

I adore the dreaminess of it, just the very thought of someone wishing all their lives to live on the moon. I like the voice of the narrator, and the 'planning' he does to travel to the moon.

The lines around 'it’s become much more unrealistic' saddened me. D:

The ending completely caught me off guard!
DomOx chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
good good good qrite more this is great