Reviews for Face Down
C. Chen chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
I really like this poem. Mostly it really emphasized the feeling you were triyng to convey. Also the repeating of the word last brings it together and offers the piece and more whole feeling. Some poets can't make their peice feel alive but yours is )
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
I totaly undersatnd this one too. Don't worry yo are not alone, you know that i've kinda been through this too. It's so graet to finally be able to relate to someone.