|Reviews for Do you know|
| Unknown Sorrow chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
He's a sophomore; and what are you? No one's out of your league! Be optimistic! Either way I can totally relate; as a matter of fact, can I add it to "my little book of poems"? No I'm just kidding about that. I'm not stealing poetry; so unprofessional. It's a great topic, but one other question for you. Were you going for a rhyme scheme with this one? At the beginning, there seemed to be one, but then it died. If you're going to have a rhyme scheme, I recommend keeping it; it helps with the poems fluency and it ties the poem together-no matter what my opinion of ryhme schemes is.
| ANDShEf0UNdhiMMx3 chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
hey; this is great. it sorta reminds me of a kidd i like and theres a two-year difference and he doesnt notice me anymore. im very impressed; keep up the great work. check out my work please :]