Reviews for StandIn Melody
rippinghouse chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
this is really beautifully written.

i especially like the line 'like the intimacy you bring tucked between your legs'.

that made my breath hitch. ]
sink florida sink chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
this is beautiful
she smolders chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
The voice in your poem sounds so bittersweet. It makes me want to mourn for this person's loss too. Take care.