Reviews for What if it Were Real?
Emikadon chapter 7 . 9/9/2012
I really enjoyed this story! It was well written and I loved it!
xXiLoveToWriteXx chapter 4 . 12/18/2010
Wait,what? :o
xXiLoveToWriteXx chapter 2 . 12/18/2010
Holy Crap I love it! It's so well written and totally original! Way better than the way I write! I'm very jealous now. (:
non.graceful chapter 7 . 10/1/2010
a bit cheesy and corny at the end there... i didn't really like the plot and all but, you gave it a shot and it might have worked, if you had a better reader other than me, that would laugh at any bits revolving around little children's fairytales and horror movies... :D lol i'll think i'll be laughing for days now thanks to you! :D keep up the good work... don't have a favourite quote.
kfjhbvasiuhvauvba chapter 7 . 6/22/2009
Another great story. And I liked the ending, it was really cute.

Nichloe
Sweetly Sarcastic chapter 7 . 11/15/2007
ew creppy old lady! i'm glad they didn't die though. and they're together! Well, sort of ish anyway
not always chapter 7 . 11/15/2007
Wow...it came to an end so quickly but it was good! I hope you make a sequel!
JZK chapter 7 . 11/15/2007
Finally the freaky women is dead

I liked the way they got saved

yey he's going to her school, cant wait to see whats going to happen
starlit x sky chapter 7 . 11/15/2007
Aww the ending was really cute. I love happy endings.

I'm glad they were found.

Good job on this story!
I'm the Evil Twin chapter 7 . 11/15/2007
I loved your story! My favorite quote was :

“You two have been worrying your parents quite a bit,” Rob said, at the same time Mr. Hope whispered, “What happened?”

“James fell in the river, so we went to her house for help. She abducted us, and tried to kill us,” Emily replied impatiently. “What took you guys so long?”

haha thanks for writing it.
Sweetly Sarcastic chapter 6 . 11/13/2007
I like it! And I can't believe they kiss... that's so cute
Chemy chapter 6 . 11/12/2007
OMG! I usually don't read stories like this, but this story rokks! Update soon please.
JZK chapter 6 . 11/12/2007
wow!

that old women is a total FREAK!

I cant wait to see what happens now that he kissed her and its been days.
not always chapter 6 . 11/12/2007
Wow, this really is a good story! Hurry and write more..I'm dying to see what happens next! By the way, the Maude woman is a freak! lol!
starlit x sky chapter 6 . 11/12/2007
Aww they kissed!

I can't wait for more, so update soon please
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