Reviews for Book 2: Heirs of Who? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Can you pleaaaaaaaaaase finish this story!? |
![]() ![]() ![]() HI! May i ask you one thing, in the end will she be with Roido or Enick. I'd rather her be with Enick, don't ask my reasons... joking... he's just so cute in a dark way, i think they'd be a perfect match. But anyway, i love the way you write it's hilarious! So, thanks for this and continue writing on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the way you write! I love your first book and sorry for not reviewing my internet sucks... So thanks for these wonderful books, can't wait untill you're done with the sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh. So, umm, Wow. Sorry bout never reviewing, Im lazy. Until theres no more chapters. Hehe. I stayed up for two whole days finishing this xD Honestly, Im hooked. I have to say, I started out skeptical. I wasnt sure I was down for the whole "Childish, hyper demon' That is Roido, but now, I absolutely love it. Also, your writing has improved from the last book. Heres a suggestion: Make teh first book like, two. Or at least two parts or something. It was kinda long. Not that I mind or anything, I was just a lot to read. Maybe have the first part be them finind all the heirs, and the second be everything that happened afterward? I dunno, your choice. Haha. So yea. I have to say, my favorite of the two is Roido xD I love 'em both, but I want Emma and Roido to get together. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i actually bum off this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() please oh please please! carry on wwriting this story! it is realy good! i am so addictedd! please write moree love you x |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was amazing! I really hope you update soon (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() hello :) im 13 and i LOVE your heirs of who stories ! they are really good and roidos charactor is amzazing (i love him) please finesh book 2 im dying to know what happens! i hope roido and emma get married hehe x |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! loved the new chapters, thanks for posting *hugs*. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. Its awesome, however you leave me with a dilema that you have yet to update in the last two years so yeah, you should keep writing, cuz i want to know what happens. Please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to honestly say I LOVED Heirs of Who & when i found out that there was a book 2 i was extremely happy. I found your characters unique in a way. Please can you finish book 2 I'm seriously anxious to read it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please write the next chapter! The sequel is awesome too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() um... all i can seem to think about is my poor roido and how hes suffering... gah i jus wanna shoot enick!*bang bang pew pew!* |
![]() ![]() ![]() no! my poor roido is crying make it stop! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I decided to write this, which happens to be my first review on FictionPress, so you wouldn't intentionally prolong updating chapters for Book 2: Heirs of Who. I must say that I find your story truly amusing. When I first began reading it though I was a bit confused at your style of writing, but I eventually got used to it and really started to enjoy your sense of humor, which reminds me of Monty Python (And the Holy Grail) and The Office (The TV show). I think your characters and the situations you create are hilarious! The way you phrase things, in that 'straight-forward yet casual' style makes the oddity of what is being said/done even more pronounced. The personality of your characters are also fun and pretty refreshing. However, there are times when I would have liked more description of the settings and appearance of the characters. I like to picture the story in my mind, as I'm sure most readers do, but it's difficult when I don't have a strong grasp of the situation. Overall, I like that the plot is fairly light-hearted (Even the serious situations are resolved fairly comfortably) and yet I am still pulled into the emotions of the characters. You have successfully integrated all my favorite things into your story: romance, suspense, humor, and tragedy. Thank you for your work and I look forward to more of it! By the way, I find it a bit odd that you write the characters thoughts in bold instead of italics. But that is just because that is how I'm used to seeing it. |