Reviews for Syth
Aweseeker chapter 26 . 7/26/2012
oh my god. this was fucking awesome. thank you for writing this perfect, awesome and glorious story.
Epical chapter 26 . 6/29/2012
O3O .. Well then. *laughs* I.. I finished and I swear, I had a fangirl bloody nose moment quite a few times. I didn't know what to do but squeeze my pillow to death and gawk at the story before me. So what does that mean to you? I really enjoyed it. The scenes between each couple was very well written and I felt like I could perfectly picture each scene in my head. That being said, I felt that some aspects of the story moved a little too fast but I got over it. Well done.
Rapidez chapter 26 . 3/16/2012
Yay! Thanks for sharing the story! It's been nice!

I liked the middle parts of it the best; all those cliché scenes and awkward dialogues. It could have stayed T-rated to my tastes and some flashbacks didn't need to be so descriptive - but they were quite nicely done! Didn't disturb the story and provided more details. That was nice, and so were your plot. Your characters felt a bit to shallow to me, like they got labeled at the beginning and didn't progress anywhere, but it was a simple story for an entertainment and I think you've managed that just perfect! Thanks for writing and finishing it! .)
Rapidez chapter 18 . 3/16/2012
Muhahaha, another enjoyable chapter! ;)
Rapidez chapter 16 . 3/16/2012
* goes all 'awwwww' *

Such a cute scene!
Rapidez chapter 12 . 3/16/2012
* melts into a pile of mush *
Rapidez chapter 7 . 3/16/2012
Hahaha, this's been a hillarious chapter and a great way to keep my mind off RL stuff, so yay, thanks. xD
Rapidez chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
Hahaha, looks like a funny, sweet and slightly cracky story, hope I'll like the rest as well! xD
Hellaine chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
Hey.

I'll probably bookmark this because I dig this first chapter I've read and would like to look over the rest when I get a chance. I'm a sucker for band stories ;)

There's a tense error and a few commas that need to be inserted in. Boring stuff that can be easily edited and if someone else already said this, I apologize for being redundant but I didn't want to read the comments and spoil the story for myself. Anyway, I suppose it's really a beta readers place.

I had a little bit of issue recognizing who was saying what and differentiating each band person. I dig the mean manager though, I would have liked a little bit more info (and a little more bite perhaps) to her, but maybe there will be later.

I enjoy the banter though, and in a way it almost works that I'm unable to differentiate each character, it makes the argument a bit more comedic.

Good read :)
Agunimon17 chapter 26 . 1/17/2012
Omg, I was so mad that you broke them up,but I forgive you because of how you got them back together. You should write more boy's love. It was a great story that had me, oh what's the phrase for a fictional story online? On the edge of my seat doesn't sound good enough. Really great story.
mcspiffers chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
I finally got around to reading! :-D

well for the first chapter I rather like it, but I'm a sucker for band fics.

My only complaint was that I found the introduction of the characters was kind of confusing. I wasn't sure which character was the youngest or which was the pretty boy until the second or third read through.

I think the story has potential and will continue to read it :-)
bookaholic13 chapter 26 . 1/12/2012
I just wanted to let you know that i really DID enjoy this story. I guess now i have to journey on, looking for new stories to keep me interested. Maybe you and I will meet again. Hopefully in similar circumstances. With similar results. :)
bookaholic13 chapter 25 . 1/12/2012
omg i SO know whats gonna happen next.
bookaholic13 chapter 24 . 1/12/2012
That would have been a CLIMACTIC ending! haha! :)
bookaholic13 chapter 23 . 1/12/2012
awww. I feel like i"m getting closer to the ending and that makes me very sad. Are you a kpop fan? I just noticed that it said SM Entertainment on the top of this page. What? Your crazy about SNSD?
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