Reviews for My Boyfriend the Billionaire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Noo, Dale! STAY! :-( Mira |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'll eatcha! LOL... I like the fact that they are spending time together without asking .. or answering! Hehe.. Mira |
![]() ![]() ![]() Outsch. . . A kiss! Yes, do it, Dale! :-) Mira |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, love it :-) She is such a nerdy little girl but I love her humour! Yeah, to say "I'm Gabriela" was not smart of him! ;-) Mira |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, the Japanese are really friendly people and I believe you, when you tell us, that there is potato flavoured ice cream! Weird, too. Mira |
![]() ![]() ![]() Saliva is healthy, especially when it's from strangers! ;-) Mira |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like like like it! Mira |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like to eat grapes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just read the whole story AGAIN. That's how much I LOVE this. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wooo! Finally! I was waiting for this since forever! Ye-uh! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg! Why can't they just fall for each other then Bam! Happily ever after? It is so antagonizing!(p.s. that is my word of the day, and yes i do know that this is supposed to be realistic so Bam doesn't fit in anywhere) |
![]() ![]() Hahaha! You made me laugh. |
![]() ![]() OH MY GOD! I support Geelong too! Though since we moved from Melbourne 12 years ago it's so very hard to support them properly from Scotland :( I love your stories; every mention of Australia and Melbourne makes me squee! I WISH I still lived there :( xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, so this was pretty funny. I liked the idea, kinda. Just seemed more like a collection of one-shots. There wasn't a lot of character development and there were a couple errors with the whole plot/characters/story line that you'll notice if you decide to edit. But other than that, it was great. I'm sure it could be even better if you put a lot more effort into creating backgrounds for the characters and with your descriptions. Could really lengthen the chapters and make them more interesting. You're hilariously funny though! WakeYourDreamz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, so I just started your story and I've been horribly confused and now I'm at the point where I'm like, 'okay, some one tell me what the frick is going on?" In the beginning she mentions something about her mum already having three kids, roight? So, there's Layn, Chris, Luke and Vincent and the new kid, Annabelle? And Renaela. That makes it 4 boys and 2 girls and 6 kids. I think you need to fix that or explain it better. |