Reviews for My Boyfriend the Billionaire
slee5133 chapter 2 . 9/2/2007
lol, wow you really are quick. hey i love ferraris! but i love porsches too. i still dont know her name. is it supposed to be that way? oh, and the part where gabriella tells her about dale, how come she doesn't question why erm "the main character" knows dale's car. anyways, great update.
Pop the Bubble chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
heyheyhey!

i love drabbles ]

is this going to be a story story? i'm kinda confused lol

spiderpig spiderpig

does whatveer you SPIDERPIG DOES

hahaha

i'm still not over that. so immature eh?

damn i wish i had a billionaire boyfriend

damn damn damn!

lol i love how she won ] although he needs to win next time ]

SHOM

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hahaah can you guess which ad thats from?
slee5133 chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
i like it so far. update soon
Fleeting Moment chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
HAHA! UPDATE!
TwinkleHeart chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
haha aw cute ) how long is this story? is it gonna be like one of those long story that i have to wait for new chapters? I MISSED UR ONE SHOTS T_T
SnowsxBitterxHeart chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
Ahahaha, I thought it was quite comical. I can't wait to see what else you will put out with this. Good job. _

*Snow*
WaterFox chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
Seem like a good story, but there is too much dialogue and not enough description. Yes, next chapter put more description in to make the story more vivid.
Boooklover chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
Great so far; keep writing!
duckliy543 chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
i loved the end of the chapeter

spiderman..

hahhaha.
Izella G chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
So far, so good. I like her thoughts.

This: [“Of course you idiot,” I spat with a roll of my eyes “My Mummies giving birth and as Dad is hopeless and doesn’t know how to use his mobile I can’t get onto him.”] was a tad unrealistic. Since when did teenage girls call their mum, mummies?

Sorry to offend anyone.

Anyway, there were a lot of missing commas, but other than that her thoughts are funny. The meeting of the two main characters (I'm assuming are) was perfect. Not too cliche.

I hope you write more!

Isabella.x
The Fates03 chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
cute...Thats the only word i can use to describe this updating! Btw, already loving the characters
Erin Ephebiphobia chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
OH MY GOD!

I LOVE IT!

"Just your friendly neighborhood Spiderman"

XD
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