| Reviews for My Boyfriend the Billionaire |
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   happilynuts chapter 2 . 9/2/2007 HAHA this is CRAZY ! lol can't wait for more! it's hilarious! haha |
| slee5133 chapter 2 . 9/2/2007 lol, wow you really are quick. hey i love ferraris! but i love porsches too. i still dont know her name. is it supposed to be that way? oh, and the part where gabriella tells her about dale, how come she doesn't question why erm "the main character" knows dale's car. anyways, great update. |
| Pop the Bubble chapter 1 . 9/2/2007 heyheyhey! i love drabbles ] is this going to be a story story? i'm kinda confused lol spiderpig spiderpig does whatveer you SPIDERPIG DOES hahaha i'm still not over that. so immature eh? damn i wish i had a billionaire boyfriend damn damn damn! lol i love how she won ] although he needs to win next time ] SHOM zoom zoom zoom zoom zoom zoom zoom zoom zoom zoom zoom zoom zoom zoom hahaah can you guess which ad thats from? |
| slee5133 chapter 1 . 9/1/2007 i like it so far. update soon |
| Fleeting Moment chapter 1 . 9/1/2007 HAHA! UPDATE! |
| TwinkleHeart chapter 1 . 9/1/2007 haha aw cute ) how long is this story? is it gonna be like one of those long story that i have to wait for new chapters? I MISSED UR ONE SHOTS T_T |
| SnowsxBitterxHeart chapter 1 . 9/1/2007 Ahahaha, I thought it was quite comical. I can't wait to see what else you will put out with this. Good job. _ *Snow* |
| WaterFox chapter 1 . 9/1/2007 Seem like a good story, but there is too much dialogue and not enough description. Yes, next chapter put more description in to make the story more vivid. |
| Boooklover chapter 1 . 9/1/2007 Great so far; keep writing! |
| duckliy543 chapter 1 . 9/1/2007 i loved the end of the chapeter spiderman.. hahhaha. |
| Izella G chapter 1 . 9/1/2007 So far, so good. I like her thoughts. This: [“Of course you idiot,” I spat with a roll of my eyes “My Mummies giving birth and as Dad is hopeless and doesn’t know how to use his mobile I can’t get onto him.”] was a tad unrealistic. Since when did teenage girls call their mum, mummies? Sorry to offend anyone. Anyway, there were a lot of missing commas, but other than that her thoughts are funny. The meeting of the two main characters (I'm assuming are) was perfect. Not too cliche. I hope you write more! Isabella.x |
| The Fates03 chapter 1 . 9/1/2007 cute...Thats the only word i can use to describe this updating! Btw, already loving the characters |
| Erin Ephebiphobia chapter 1 . 9/1/2007 OH MY GOD! I LOVE IT! "Just your friendly neighborhood Spiderman" XD |