|Reviews for UNTiiTLED LOVE POEM|
| huimei chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
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| LyricsArePoetry chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
Aww this is sweet. You can tell you had jut broke up with someone!
| DiaRose chapter 1 . 9/10/2007
I think you have nice ideas, and some very good lines stored up in your head, but you need more words so you can make more good lines. I notice you seem to have a couple really nice lines in each poem, but the rest is just built around that. I can relate, I do my best not to do the same thing, but you need to work on that.