|Reviews for Shimmering Light in a Shimmering Soul|
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
You have to space in between paragraphs otherwise your text gets all grouped together. Then the reader can't read it.
| Gemma Lovell chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
THAT WAS AMAZING. Gah, you're a very good writer, but this could be the best thing you've written yet! There were a couple of grammaticla errors (four, if I remember correctly), but otherwise it was brilliant. I loved the end, too. You packed a lot of stuff into a small word count and it's...I can't think of a good enough adjective. You rock. More than before.
| KuteVampire chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
I like this. It seems like it should be some kind of play.