Reviews for it's numb now chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
i liked it. its more than poem. its art.
The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
This was a great poem!

You made it so clear how you felt, with the words you chose, and your message got down really well!

I liked the setup, and how you made such short sentences, with some of them in half-moons.

This was a great poem!

It'll go in my favorites!

The Reverse Edge Blade
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
Yep this is how I felt. I love this adding to favorits
DHABUZ chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
wow... this has to be my thots that even i cudnt potray so well...great work
dress her up in fairytales chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
and i know exactly how you feel.
sweets555 chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
i agree entirely.

i have a story for you by the way...idk if im making it into a poem or messaging you, but either way, ill tell u asap.