Reviews for I Am Not
nolongerusingthis chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
i really like this. You said so much with so little. Good job. :)
Qzie chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
Hm... that's very thought-provoking. The end seems to tie everything together, because shattering implies a weakness, while crystal implies strength, and strength and weakness are reflected in the rest of the poem, especially in the second stanza. Everything balances out. I'm very tired, sorry if this is way off. It almost sounds like a riddle, really, just the way you phrased everything. Great job. :) -Qzie
CandleQueen chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
Love the imagery of the shattered crystal heart. Hauntingly beautiful. A bit short, but to the point. :)

-Ramen
the fray fangirl chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
I hope you knew what you were wriring!

I totally love it though.
l o b s t e r chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
that was really good. simple, yet meaningful.