Reviews for Jonnie the Girl
Client Actuel chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
Your story rocks! :D

I am just starting to read it, but I stopped my reading because I really had to tell you something. There’s a high probability that you won’t care, but it's just incredible how the guys in your fic are described exactly like the members of the rock band blessthefall! They have the same personalities and the same appearances!

Examples!

Trent would be Beau Bokan, the Tall, Dark, and Handsome man whore:

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Danny would be Eric Lambert, the small, stylish and drama queen redhead

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Ryder would be Mike Frisby, the silent and rebel blonde :

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and Jonah would be the friendly Matt Traynor :

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Unfortunately, there is no Asian kid in the band… But Sean’s personality would fit with Jared Warth's cheerful and geeky one:

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The whole band:

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They might look a little too emo for your fic... I just felt like I had to share! It's amazing, I feel like I'm reading a blessthefall fanfiction because their personalities fit so much! - Anyways, thanks for sharing your story with us, it’s awesome! :D
prongsi chapter 41 . 6/9/2010
i just wanted to say that this is really like the best story i read here, and im crying right now.. :s

im so sorry real life is so cruel.. / :S
A Merry Savant chapter 42 . 6/5/2010
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A Merry Savant chapter 41 . 6/5/2010
Thank you very much for sharing this story with all of us.

Not simply because of the real emotions and sheer wording ability put into this work, but because you bared your soul to tell a real story to us.

Not everybody is able to do that. And this is what makes a writer. Thank you.

There HAS to be a way to stop Jalens from happening.

Thank you for this story.
ManicMango chapter 41 . 6/3/2010
Aw! *sniffs* I'm soo sad! I didn't want him to die! But I thought it was wonderful that you stuck to the truth! *wipes tear* BTW, you're life is so interesting!
V.C.Kazz chapter 41 . 5/25/2010
i have to say, amazing story. i love how u made something so cliche so uncliche if u kno what i mean although jonah and jonnie might end up together someday who knows. but u did the whole plot line perfectly i thought it was very very well written and i could tell it was true (sounds like u experienced this) ending was PERFECT! although i must say i was quite fond of Ryder :) loved him but still great ending and writing skills and story over all :) this story is the reason i pulled an all-nighter last night...but it was worth it :) good job!
Crissy19 chapter 43 . 5/21/2010
I really loved this story. Such a sad ending, i actually cried. Her and ryder should have had a better ending. Gosh its just so sad. I loved everyone tho.
xxXNightsareDaysXxx chapter 41 . 4/28/2010
I love this story. Sad ending though.. ..

Would it be possible to know the real ending behind the real story?

:)
helplessly lovestruck chapter 41 . 4/24/2010
thats ... just cruel... ):

thats .. so sad. omgosh. :( OMGOSH. im not teary cause you know cold heart and all but omgod that is so sad... i didnt expect the whole ryder on drugs and ryder dying. WTP.

i loved it, nonetheless. :( aw. :(

thanks for the lovely story, and im sorry.
Jessie Wulf chapter 31 . 4/21/2010
Dear lord, I feel so bad for her now. I mean, Ryder is good for her and what not. We all can see it. They love each other. But, I feel bad for her because of her being rejected by TWO guys she loved. How horrible. I mean, how much rejection can a girl take?
DA-chen1 chapter 43 . 4/16/2010
I'm so sad!

:(

I want Ryder back! :(

DA-chen
DA-chen1 chapter 35 . 4/16/2010
Really great! Now he is free to love whom HE wants! :-)

DA-chen
A-Bit-Of-Everything chapter 41 . 4/16/2010
o.0 I so DID NOT expect this end...but it was good(i guess) Although i would have preferred a sugar coated end...But it was an Epic End...Amazing till the end.
DA-chen1 chapter 22 . 4/15/2010
Oh sweet.

I really like the story :-)

DA-chen
DA-chen1 chapter 9 . 4/14/2010
Trent and Rachel, too?

A bit too much of finding the big love here...but it's okay.

As long as Jonnie finds someone :-)

DA-chen
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