Reviews for Jonnie the Girl |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, it sounds interesting. i love the dialougue. please update soon! |
![]() ![]() Ana, it's perfect! Honestly, I can completely hear you speaking every word of this...and not just because you're reading it to me right now. (Side note: You suck...just because I'm anonymous P) (Second side note: You need to write every story you've just told me, as well as updating this one on a regular basis...please! *kitty eyes*) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i'm so excited to read this! i really like it so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HoHO, haha, UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your style! You only tell the important things. Very intriguing prologue. UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait for the chaos and humor to commence. _ Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful beginning! It flowed nicely, and I relaly like the way you started it. It gives your main character a quirky voice, but all and all, this first chapter gave us a good feel of how our main character is. :D Good job! Good luck with the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, I like it. Intriguing (especially the last parts). I like how you explained it all, without over doing it. AND it's realistic. W0ot! Update soon... please? Isabella.x |