Seriously? I don't have a kindle, iphone, OR android.
:P

Umm. What if you don't have an iPhone or Android? Are you gonna post the rest up here also? Please! It's really really REALLY good.

You meanie... Thats just... I mean what about the people who CANT buy it? Got my hopes up because I was running out of things to read and then THIS... Well Im obviously not going to buy your book for money, so buh-bye.

I think you should put SAMPLE or Just a preview in the summary because people go here expecting a great read only to be dissapointed. There is nothing worst than finding a great story and to not be able to finish it. I don't think what you are doing is wrong because frankly we have no say in what you do and you are an author who has the right to get payed for your brilliant work and fictionpress are for aspiring authors whose story is bound to get published anyway. I just wish you would put a little consideration for you readers who cannot afford to buy your story yet.

...that is just evil... -_-

I can't find it on Amazon. Is it the same title? Could you post a link?

I don't have a kindle D nor an iPhone or an Android. Damn I feel deprived right now. Then again... I know I've actually read this story before...but the problem is that the details are quite vague in my memory. Cursing my poor capacity for remembering right now [ well one day if I ever get a kindle/iPhone/Android, hopefully I'll remember your story and download it D

I think people are being a little harsh. I mean, Fictionpress is for aspiring writers who want to one day become published authors. Although it's slightly irritating that it was once free, I congratulate you on getting published, something I one day hope to do. I guess this is just like one huge big blurb and I will look for this book on kindle because I can tell it will be great. :D

this is awesome i really love the dialogue. it beautiful.

very interesting! its written so well.

Wow, I have to say I'm actually not shocked. I am, however, a bit pissed off. You hook us in with a good story and then you pull this "download my book." Which, I wouldn't mind if it was free. However, it is not. This is fictionpress. Are you not familiar with it? People post their stories here, for FREE, so other people can enjoy them, for FREE. Don't turn this site into a sales pitch. I, for one, have a way to read kindle books on my desktop, but then I went to download your book and I have to pay 3.49 for your book. It's not that much, but that's not the point. This is fictionpress, a place for free book publication. If your not going to show us the whole story, might as well take it down. This isn't your free advisement agency.

Love this already!

Oh come on! Please put it up! I thought you took it down because someone plagiarized it. But that's not the case, so please? If only for a limited time? But please let me know when/if you do!

(P.S If it helps convince you, there few great stories on fictionpress, and yours seems to be one of the few, so i think you are depriving us readers here, lol)

Okay that's all.

thanks.

Wow, I remember reading this story...this is really uncool.

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