Haha, the ending was great! I loved how they stopped everything to go find Marty :) Your story was really cute and it seemed very realistic to me, even though it tended to be a bit over dramatic at times. I enjoyed it very much :D

I liked how you started this off despite it being a bit depressing. It really sets the mood and tone of the story and Lorelei's character. I can't wait to find out more about her, her fiance and how she manages to cope with such a loss :)

I liked it a lot :) I thought the first few chapters could be edited and a litle better, but it was pretty good. It kind of reminds me of Sarah Dessen's writing.

Okay, I must admit that I dearly loved this. ) I loved your characters and the beginning was so perfect and the rest of it was just so... Good. Haha. I love how you brought everything full circle... So basically, good job. D

Okay..so I almost didnt read this because it was Tragedy/Drama, and I hate stories with non-Happily-ever-after endings. I figure if I am reading a story for my entertainment I don't want to come to the end deppresed and angry at the author. Sure I was balling when she lost her baby but overall I completly enjoyed your story, it felt like I was reading a book, like a published, checked out from the libray book. I personally thought that there was nothing too jarring that stuck out at me, I liked it. So great job!

i FREAKIN' love this story(:

It's so sweet, funny and adoring

Everything a good romance story needs

Great job!~

Sad beginning to the story, but I like it, keeping me waiting for something to lift the depression...I like your writing style :]

Heya, I enjoyed reading your story, was quite different from the other stories on FP, now Ima go read more, just thought I'd drop by and say well-written!

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Oh my goodness, this may very well be one of my favourite fictionpress stories ever.

I mean, there are a few grammatical errors along the way where I think your mind was just working too fast for your hands to keep up - half finished word and the like - but, wow, your characters... the situations... I think I may be a little bit in love.

So, yeah, you get the idea that I'm liking this?

It's kind of funny, I thought it was complete and got to the end of chapter 23, saw that there was only one chapter to go and was actually severely disappointed. Thank goodness I was wrong...

So looking forward to seeing how you finish things, these guys are so so lovable. You have a gift. Truly. Be grateful.

Thanks - Tehcrazykatlady

legit the best story i have ever read (: i loved it sososososo much! just thought id share that; haha.

Wow, I really didn't expect the whole Kathy drama, but I hope you let it work out happily, and that you keep John and Lorelei together

i dont want it too end

aww its almost done

I love this. There is something so completely heartbreaking about it. I think it's the way you write, the way everything is so carefully crafted together that tugs at my heartstrings and I am in love. It's beautifully done and I love that it moves slowly, that it's not rushing through so they can fall in love. It really is beautiful.