great chapter! thanks!

aww almost over

Great chapter. I loved John and Kathy's arguments, their fun to read. I'm so excited for Iris and Peter! I hope everything goes well with them and the baby. Update soon.

Amazing chapter, as usual. I like that a bit of the tension between her and her mother has been resolved. Update soon!

thanks for the chapter!

i think they let convicts go on the computer, so you could prob finish writing the story

You have midterms in January? You know, when I first read your author's note, I just skimmed over it and thought that you were saying that you were already in a women's correctional facility and I was like WHAT...HOW CAN THAT BE? But then I regained my common sense, haha, and re-read the sentence. Yeah, I think I just embarrassed myself there, haha. Oh well.

So, I love to see the two acting like an actual couple and it'll be even greater when they can actually sleep in the same bed-closer, for the whole night. I can't believe this is almost over, but then again, I can. Lorelei is almost at the end of her journey of coming to terms with things: Pearce's death, her mom's lack of motherly actions, her miscarriage, her drunk marriage and losing her virginity to John.

I can't wait to read about Christmas with his family!

It wasn't bad at all! My favourite line: "I think...I think I can wait 10 years."

AMAZING. Haha.

I'm so glad for these two.

That was a good chapter..much more realistic than "happily ever after" yet still optimistic. That wasn't the last chapter, right?

There are parts where I can tell you are unsure of this chapter, but I think you did a great job of tying things up for the two of them. It's not happily ever after, but there is a promise of something good, and it fits. I like it.

This was really great, so don't even worry. I really loved reading this chapter because it was good to read about Lorelei finally letting go of what's been hurting her. And it's amazing that what usually ruins a marriage (a miscarriage) actually will (or so it seems) eventually strengthen theirs. And I loved that John revealed that he had seen her before the bar scene and that he thinks he loves her and that he could even wait 10 years for her. So sweet! I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Great chapter! I loved it! I can't wait for the update!

it showed some insight into John and why he chose her, does this mean that the story is coming to a close?

im happy she is giving him a chance!

Ah, you made me cry again! Beautiful chapter! I absolutely love this story.