Reviews for The Bartender Was Joking
pinkeclipse chapter 23 . 1/20/2009
great chapter! thanks!
violet-eyez chapter 23 . 1/18/2009
aww almost over
AlexSays chapter 23 . 1/18/2009
Great chapter. I loved John and Kathy's arguments, their fun to read. I'm so excited for Iris and Peter! I hope everything goes well with them and the baby. Update soon.
Juneaux chapter 22 . 1/5/2009
Amazing chapter, as usual. I like that a bit of the tension between her and her mother has been resolved. Update soon!
pinkeclipse chapter 22 . 1/1/2009
thanks for the chapter!
violet-eyez chapter 22 . 12/31/2008
i think they let convicts go on the computer, so you could prob finish writing the story
funnechick chapter 22 . 12/31/2008
You have midterms in January? You know, when I first read your author's note, I just skimmed over it and thought that you were saying that you were already in a women's correctional facility and I was like WHAT...HOW CAN THAT BE? But then I regained my common sense, haha, and re-read the sentence. Yeah, I think I just embarrassed myself there, haha. Oh well.

So, I love to see the two acting like an actual couple and it'll be even greater when they can actually sleep in the same bed-closer, for the whole night. I can't believe this is almost over, but then again, I can. Lorelei is almost at the end of her journey of coming to terms with things: Pearce's death, her mom's lack of motherly actions, her miscarriage, her drunk marriage and losing her virginity to John.

I can't wait to read about Christmas with his family!
Juneaux chapter 21 . 12/30/2008
It wasn't bad at all! My favourite line: "I think...I think I can wait 10 years."


I'm so glad for these two.
batzmaru chapter 21 . 12/22/2008
That was a good chapter..much more realistic than "happily ever after" yet still optimistic. That wasn't the last chapter, right?
dblack50 chapter 21 . 12/22/2008
There are parts where I can tell you are unsure of this chapter, but I think you did a great job of tying things up for the two of them. It's not happily ever after, but there is a promise of something good, and it fits. I like it.
funnechick chapter 21 . 12/22/2008
This was really great, so don't even worry. I really loved reading this chapter because it was good to read about Lorelei finally letting go of what's been hurting her. And it's amazing that what usually ruins a marriage (a miscarriage) actually will (or so it seems) eventually strengthen theirs. And I loved that John revealed that he had seen her before the bar scene and that he thinks he loves her and that he could even wait 10 years for her. So sweet! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
smrae chapter 21 . 12/22/2008
Great chapter! I loved it! I can't wait for the update!
violet-eyez chapter 21 . 12/22/2008
it showed some insight into John and why he chose her, does this mean that the story is coming to a close?
pinkeclipse chapter 21 . 12/21/2008
im happy she is giving him a chance!
Juneaux chapter 20 . 12/19/2008
Ah, you made me cry again! Beautiful chapter! I absolutely love this story.
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