omg super amazing. this is an awesome twist u are def the master at crazy twist you would never expect lol. no seriously though this is an amazing story and i cant wait to find out wat'll happen whether they'll stay together or what. Ne who you r a very talented writer... u give just enough description that i can see it all in my mind but not too much that i become bored with the story and your characters have very realistic lines of speech which i find a lot of authors struggle with... so ne way awesome story awesome plot and awesome writing.

how could you? First Pearce now this! She has too many feelings to contend with, the question here is, is this going to break up their marriage or make it stronger?

love the story!

This was so sad. I definitely didn't see them losing the baby. After everything the two of them have been through they deserve some happiness.

And what kind of doctor just blows off a pregnant patient who complains of pain. stupid doctor.

I can't believe she lost the baby...are Lorelei and John going to have another one?

update soon

that

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Do hospitals really keep the babies like that?

:( I want them together. (sidenote: there are a couple of spelling errors)

Update soon

~P.S.

How heart breaking! I hope this pulls them together rather than pushing them apart. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

This was SO sad. I still want John and Lorelei to be together! Please update asap, this story is amazing.

what a bombshell, but this allows her to face her feelings now

This story is so amazing! I can not wait to read more!

Hi, I just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying your story! Keep up the good work and I look forward to more updates!

when is she going to try to get over pearce?

hey this was a good chapter hope you update soon!

lol...sunny story so is he going to tell her why he doesn't like hospitals?