| Reviews for The Bartender Was Joking |
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   Nerdette chapter 17 . 9/6/2008 Good stuff! |
| belle1220 chapter 17 . 9/6/2008 i like this. good idea. |
| vio923 chapter 9 . 9/6/2008 Enjoying this story - but some things are not realistic. First of all, because of privacy reasons the person at the clinic could not call him and give him information without Lorelei's approval. Secondly, pregnant women can get divorced. You need to keep this realistic otherwise it reads like a 'fairy tale' instead of fiction. |
| Crash Happy chapter 16 . 9/3/2008 Ooh! I like this story alot, and I didn't find anything wrong with this chapter. When I read it, I can see everything in my head, like Coleen about to smack her, and the Parce's grave with john in the background, and Iris standing in front of the building with her hair all disheveled and her clothes messy and stuff. And when I read the part where Iris called and they were rushed, I actually felt rushed, and... I'm getting carried away. But basically, continue with the story, by the way, one year ago today you started the story. |
| OhSweetheart chapter 16 . 9/3/2008 Cool story, and the whole pipes burst thing reminds me of Donnie Darko, if you haven't seen the movie go watch it! Please update again soon, though I understand the pains of Junior year, just wait til you start senior year and actually have to start applying to colleges. |
| Juneaux chapter 15 . 7/6/2008 I can't believe I cried during the first chapter. Usually I have to get to know the characters a bit, but in this case I think I'm already in love with the characters. I love the whole idea of this story. It is truly original and should have three times the reviews than it has. Wonderful characters, writing - everything! I can't wait to read what happens next! |
| Trish123 chapter 15 . 6/16/2008 i am absolutely enthralled by your story... please update real soon because i am getting really curious and please make her do something other than give a wonderful display of waterworks! |
| violet-eyez chapter 15 . 6/15/2008 finally she is starting to feel for him |
| ipanema chapter 15 . 6/13/2008 hey, finally an intersting chapter after a few depressing ones, i mean no ofence!, im just happy shes finally moving on a little bit istead of crying the whole chapter. |
| Myrix chapter 3 . 6/13/2008 I have doubts if she loved him as a fiance or loved him as a brother/friend... |
| Myrix chapter 2 . 6/13/2008 who's house does he go to? Her fiance's mom? |
| Myrix chapter 1 . 6/12/2008 I feel so sory for her... I'm predicting that she will fall in love again. |
| violet-eyez chapter 14 . 5/1/2008 so what's going to happen now |
| annmaso chapter 14 . 4/27/2008 I am truly sorry for your lost. This chapter was sad, but it was good, I really feel for her. Please update soon. Ann |
| Minty chapter 2 . 4/26/2008 I like this story so far :].. this chapter made me cry |