this was sad. I feel bad for Lorelei, though the way Colleen reacted is probably normal - I hope she forgives her at one point. I liked seeing Lorelei and John becoming friends, I'm so excited to see what happens when the baby is born.

And you do not have to apologize... I'm sorry for your loss. Please take all the time you need.

Aww. It's so sad. Are you going to elaborate on how he died? Oh, God. Now I feel like a heartless witch...

so will they tell his mom?

awesome update i love kathy tons and her and John's relationship it makes me laugh. Keep the new chaps comin this is a great story

Another great chapter, though I wish you'd update more often. I love how Kathy was able to figure everything out. I really like this story so far, and I can't wait for more.

I really, really, like this story! Will you be updating soon? I seriously hope so! :D It's very well written and interesting.

can john show just a bit more emotion

i really like that you've made her react to this the way a person really would. she hasn't fallen head over heels for the guy; she still cries and resents him and misses Pearce even if she is warming up to him.

god job.

I really enjoyed this chapter, and can't wait for the next. Meeting John's sister is going to be interesting, and I can't wait til Lorelei tells her father and Pearce's mother. Update as soon as you can!

i actually really like it. it made me like john so much more and it also showed loreiel warming up to john. cant wait til the next update.

sweet.

so is she going to be those evil mother-in-laws

I've been eagerly waiting for this chapter, and I've got to say, it was definitely worth the wait! SO much happened in this chapter, I loved it. Update soon!

update soon

it's awsome

Your story is good. You really can feel for you charactors. You are a good writer. Please update soon! ;)